Sacrifice Poem by Luke Hobbs

Sacrifice

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beat, bellow and decay,
is there nothing more,
cold liquid crimson,
colorful tainting,
fallen from within,

down dark corduroy,
to the bridge's end,
descending stairway,
plunge into the abyss,
baptism by fire,
cauterized spirit,
fresh wounds pass away,
clear the dross,
to set the stage,
away with held breathe,

how it kills us,
to learn, to listen,
freedom within dependence,
the scent of melon,
the night fragrant,
senses awakened,
memories lead on,
through velvet poetry,

softly sleep soothes,
lines drawn with the shades,
where sand buries lies,
these translucent chameleons,
change like water,
the cages weaken,
relinquish their quarry

Saturday, September 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: coldness,darkness,fire,learning,listen,spirit,wounds
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An early work which I later edited.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 02 September 2019

aptism by fire, cauterized spirit, fresh wounds pass away, clear the dross, to set the stage, away with held breathe, .. fire and spirit and the learning we do. well written poem with fine ideas.tony

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Luke Hobbs 04 September 2019

You are very kind, Dr Tony. Thank you.

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