! Sacrifice Poem by Ajay Pisharody

! Sacrifice

Rating: 2.7


Soldiers sacrifice

their lives whereas

Terrorists victimise

Innocent humans





November 29,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ch J Satyananda Kumar 03 June 2009

Very good Ajay. But it would be better if it is: 'Soldier lay down their lives, Terrorists slay down the innocent. This would be more poetic. OK? pl excuse me for my liberties. Bye Bye.

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