Wednesday, November 11, 2009

Sacrifices Comments

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Autumn leaves have fallen
across long forgotten battlefields
where deep below the ground
the dead lie asleep.
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David Harris
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Fay Slimm 12 November 2009

How true are the final lines of this tribute David - - a fine verse of appeal for a better warless world...10 from Fay.

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Carol Gall 12 November 2009

excellent write david peace seems another centurys leasure 10

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Patti Masterman 11 November 2009

I sometimes think war and fighting is intrinsic to man's soul and he never arrives anywhere without it's already being a possibility. But then I always manage to meet another soul, who refuses to even deliberately harm an insect, and I realize the error must lie with people like me, who think something can't be avoided no matter how much it is hated.

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Sandra Martyres 11 November 2009

Yes David you are right....we still live with killing fields and watch in silence...If only some lessons could be learnt we would save so many innocent lives! ! ! 10+

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