Sad Song Of A Remote Village Factory Girl Comments
Her soft fingers are ideal for a piano reeds to make a classic musical note
But she struggles with hard steel and turn them into tools.
Sharpen tools go to the market and she comes home with a blunt heart.
She re-counts her small daily wage for her wedding dress
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You are the creator of many beautiful, sad songs. This is one of your best. Your factory girl is a memorable soul.10/10. As always, Sandra
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12/16/2025 11:59:10 AM # 1.0.0
This is sad and sweetly sung, Nimal. You're right. Poverty is a cruel life journey. Your story stirs the reader to change the world and bake a beautiful wedding cake for these two lovers to live happily ever after. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Love, Allie x x x x