Saksham Comments

A TEN and much much more for the Vote! Sincerest, Sylvia Frances Chan, Dutch Poetess, paintress, cartoons, designer of poemcards, photographer, critic, writer and evangelist. I apologize for the small mistakes typed.

LAST PART: at least you infotmed that in the first stanza, right? IF you was not named SAKSHAM, then you would not have been able to create this most attractive poem! I have enjoyed the smartest thoights worded here! Thank YOU for sharing, Saksham!

PART THREE: This poem you have created with a courageous mind and your person is that you wish to survive and you have succeeded in doing so. I am happy for you that you have become a strong person and poet now. Do you want to tell the readers here that you have got your names, given by two men? So your mother is a man too?

PART TWO: These adults are of course PEDOFILS and these saddes kids who were entenring thier teenagers'period, most of them committed suicide. I KNOW this because everytime it occurred, the TV News mentioned that..

At least you have become a mature person and a true personality, you have survived where others commit suicide! In my country, the kids and teens are so weakest, they expose themselves to the internet and when adults are approaching them with the wrong intentions, they could not even flee! .

A sad story of caricature and demeaning mimicry, expertly narrated in an insightful poem nicely brought forth from the heart. It also depicts the power of positive thinking. A beautiful motivational poem. Thanks for sharing Saksham.

war cry AND VICTORY SONG