Aaron Lynn

Rookie - 341 Points (7/13/94 / Evansville IN)

Salt On The Lips - Poem by Aaron Lynn

As floating debris
Across the span of the vast
Within the primordial womb
Our throats, as a whole, would be open
But instead we are barred by this wound
Still some lone mouths are now gaping
Kissed by salt that was dropped on their lips
Shifting perspectives and purpose
Towards the dawn of perpetual eclipse

Topic(s) of this poem: religion, spirituality

Comments about Salt On The Lips by Aaron Lynn

  • (8/13/2015 3:37:00 PM)

    Beautiful yet very vague, essence and meaning lie hidden behind your imagery. Enticing poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • (3/16/2015 12:56:00 AM)

    Good piece. Pen more! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 16, 2015

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