Tim Underwood

Sand - Poem by Tim Underwood

Caress me, for I crave softness against by flesh
Warm me with your subtle touch.
Excite me with a wind swept dance.
Arouse me with your passive form.
Shield me from the final storm.

Topic(s) of this poem: passion

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The inspiration for this poem was a trip to Morocco and the seen from The English Patient. The scene being the leading lady's naked back brilliantly compared to the Sahara Desert.

Comments about Sand by Tim Underwood

  • Romeo Della Valle (4/3/2012 8:06:00 PM)

    Short but powerful write that is well penned and rich in imagery! Very romantic and touching! Bravo! Tim! Your poetic talent is clearly filtering through this amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! You are heading the right direction in the Poetry World! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

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  • Martin O'Neill (4/3/2012 6:41:00 PM)

    I love the imagery here. Should the last line be 'Shield me from the final storm? ' (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 12, 2015

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