Tuesday, April 3, 2012
Sand Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Caress me, for I crave softness against by flesh
Warm me with your subtle touch.
Excite me with a wind swept dance.
Arouse me with your passive form.
...
Read full text
COMMENTS
Martin O'Neill
03 April 2012
I love the imagery here. Should the last line be 'Shield me from the final storm? '
1
0
Reply
Best Poems
Best Member Poems
Best Classical Poems
New Poems
New Poets
Best Member Poets
Best Classical Poets
Explore Poems
Explore Poets
Poem Of The Day
Love Poems
Baby Poems
Death Poems
Sad Poems
Birthday Poems
Wedding Poems
Nature Poems
Sorry Poems
Hero Poems
Poetry E-Books
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
4/2/2026 12:37:56 AM # 1.0.0
Short but powerful write that is well penned and rich in imagery! Very romantic and touching! Bravo! Tim! Your poetic talent is clearly filtering through this amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! You are heading the right direction in the Poetry World! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!