Wednesday, November 8, 2006

Sand Soldiers Comments

Rating: 5.0

Surrounding shadow closes in
The darkness hangs, begins to grow
With eyes that pierce the shields of men
And fire burns each friend and foe
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The Jester
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Chuck Audette 08 November 2006

Powerful poem. Like the contrasts you've created and the strong flow. 10. -chuck

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