.sandy Toes Tickled Warm Or Home’s True Heart (Couplets) Poem by Debora Short

.sandy Toes Tickled Warm Or Home’s True Heart (Couplets)

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Sands of time, sands of home, and sands of love
Sing such lovely songs to my well traveled

Sandy toes tickled warm Caribbean
Home –d and splashed with turquoise’s good sun

Foamy dances and lacey curls make public
Delicate beauty’s shells ~ bits of sea glass

Drifting barnacled treasures from above
Collected places, grains distance-d walked

Haulover, Melbourne, Sebastian, Peconic
Sanded estuaries, oceans and bays

Eternal tiny groundings filtering
Paths of His light, His times, home’s true heart

(Sweeping Memories, Tennessee
October 27,2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 29 October 2006

This feels intact in its content and is quite a show, well done again Debora Love duncan X

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 October 2006

YOU ARE TH'QUEEN OF COUPLETS, MY DEAR...IN FACT, I HAVE RECENTLY CONVERTED SEVERAL OF MY OLDER WORKS WHICH WERE STRUCTUED IN APROSESQUE, OR ESSAY FORMAT, INTO COUPLETS & IT JUST OPENED TH' POEM UP FOR ITS FULL WORTH TO BE EASILY READ....I LIKE THIS PIECE A LOT, DEBRA...A FINE JOB INDEED......'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F jR}

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