Sunday, April 20, 2014

Save The Girl Child Comments

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She was born a girl,
with hair so curled,
she was born amongg shouts and cries
had it been a boy, they would have smiled
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Daphne Edwin
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Daphne Edwin 28 April 2014

thnks for the comments.pls feel free to comment on my other poems to help me improve. :)

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Francie Lynch 21 April 2014

I sympathize with such a situation. I have three daughters whom I adore. They are the well-spring of my life. Good write. In need of a hard edit.

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Suman Kumar Das 20 April 2014

A thought provoking and revolutionary write....................liked it dear!

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Daphne Edwin

Daphne Edwin

chennai, india
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