Scars Poem by ian munywe

Scars

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SCARS
Take a long look,
visualize.
Do you see the scars,
countless as the stars?
As an infant my frame,
was flawless faultless.
But the world had to imprint,
its indelible ink.
Or so I think,
daily on the brink.
Of the Titanic sink,
until the Absolute Power towers.
What is left is evident,
pronounced and eminent.
Now bordering a new season,
I have a handful of reasons.
To relent despite much sand,
down the hourglass already spent.
Yet the voyage seems longer,
with my resolve not growing stronger.
Take a long look,
visualize.
Do you see the scars,
countless as the stars?
IAN MUNYWE©

Scars
Friday, March 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: pain,remorse
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life has so many challenges and painful experiences.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 March 2018

Nice thought provoking poem, well articulated and elegantly penned in good rhyme scheme with insight. Thanks for sharing Ian.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 March 2018

Do you see the scars, countless as the stars? scars, pain, sufferings, challenges..... symbols........ very nice poem dear poet. thank you

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Ian Munywe 17 March 2018

Thanks very much Dr.tony Brahmin. Cheers

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