Wednesday, January 21, 2009

Scent Of Time. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wafting, by breeze of past scented summers
The breath of our days together drifts over
Each vision of mem'ry we made. Our fun
As we sensed the other's desires, wove
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Fay Slimm
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 21 January 2009

A very sweet fragrance, love has such a sweet aroma... Andy x 10

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Jim Norausky 21 January 2009

Fay, This poem has such a classic feel to it. You are very accomplished. Thank you. Jim

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Fiona Davidson 21 January 2009

As always Eay you have produced a beautiful picture written in your words...thank you...Fi

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Fay, what lingers for me here is the aromatic permeation of a love that refuses to forget that it has drifted by... this write touches me deeply... aroha Deana xx

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Sid John Gardner. 21 January 2009

I gave my love perfume as a present once. Each time I am aware of that fragrance worn by another I think of her, and our great time together comes back to me. A sweet poem from a fragrant poet. Sid xxx

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Kris Smith 21 January 2009

Lovely poem Fay beautiful words my friend 10 +++ Chris

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Fay Slimm

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