Friday, January 22, 2010

Screaming Earth Comments

Rating: 5.0

We need to save our planet today!
Before it dies and withers away.....
Stop giving it so much pain
For once please use your brains! ! ! !
...
Read full text

sajjad najam
COMMENTS
Hugo Sanchez 18 February 2010

great poem and a greater message.

0 0 Reply
Joe Rosochacki 29 January 2010

Sajjad, Your poem is great but however the earth will keep on going no matter if humans are here or not. The earth shall not die and only the inhabitants; will correct that statement, the earth shall perish about 5,000,000,000 years from now, give or take a few hundreds of thousands of years; providing the earth should not encounter a planetary size asteroid to knock it off its axis. You have good writing techniques and keep up the good work.

0 0 Reply
Marieta Maglas 29 January 2010

We must save animals, whatever big or small wonderful reflective poem, well expressed ideas to convey the message 10

0 0 Reply
Aastha Uppal 22 January 2010

a strong message delieverd through simple words... truth presented at its best great work! ! !

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success