# ' Searching Young Love' Comments

I think this is the best understanding I have about this poem, that is it 'Someone's mystified thoughts about love's puzzling sensuality'

Don... It's saying what it means: p about the 'haiku brevity'.. hmmm, are you talking about how the last stanza can stand alone? And to what it means.... for some reason, I was thinking of a man sitting on a bench, at the park, on sunday afternoon. This man is remisnescing how his last lover and him enjoy the sound of their voices, the faces of love, the feelingof peaceful love resting in your heart when you see young lovers passing by... the poem is trying to convey an asexual feeling of love. Thanks for the comment :) regards, Daf

Daffodil, this poem reads as a series of chapters or pictures, probably pictures. It has an almost Haiku brevity at back of it. I glimpse much of it and am intrigued - but I don't think I understand it properly. A powerful and different view none-the-less. Rgds, Ivan