Friday, November 18, 2011

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Do you see what I see?
Do you see the pain behind my eyes,
reminding me that it was al lies.
The scares on my soul,
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stephanie simmons
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Unwritten Soul 18 November 2011

Brokenness..when i finished this i think.....u was breaking the heart with a knife life that not sharp at all and each time it cut your blood it pain and feel more as it cut by blunt knife...all pieces of you fall...and when you try to merge them back you found something missing and it feels like you not have strength to get heal...but the pain hopefully will less by time, i hope so...but how long you will get mend, i dont know...it's depend on how many pieces of heart you missed..I really really hope you will get healthy one again coz the pain one make you cant focus what you doing now..it disturbing your life, keep writing for the great poem_Unwritten Soul

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