See Through No More Poem by Mike Kendall

See Through No More

Rating: 5.0


i've walked this path for years
with loud music in my ears
but ive never stoped to think
if im pouring beauty down the sink

so my eyes catch spark
and they begin to lighten up the dark
revealing whats around me
and the things that i used to see

before i saw the sun whine
now i see the sun shine
before i never saw a puddles reflection
now i can see a whole new dimension

its how the last leaf falls
its how sound suddenly stalls
Its the sway of the trees
its the motion of the seas

ill do anything to make myself smile
it just makes my day worth while
ill continue to find that spark
and look forward to the journeys that i will embark

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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