Seeing U Again Poem by Gainor Ventresco

Seeing U Again

Rating: 4.5


Seeing you, my reluctant muse, has restored me once again
You remembered the day we met and i took you home in the rain
on your birthday and we found ourselves in eachother
In the morning with our coffee and tangerines, walking to the beach
because you did not want to go home
after all this time and space and madness
my heart remembered all my mind had forgotten
you gave me a book, you had carried in your bag since that first night on the Point
The pages and pages i wrote u then now seem insincere and common
i re read that poetry now only on your birthday, the day you set me free
Fate and my sleeping demons allowed me to find you again
Again you found me empty and lost
Again you restored me
Again and again and again......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Max Reif 05 August 2005

I think you succeed in sharing what you want to in this poem. I found the flashback section very effective. I felt a little confused in the 'birthday' and 'set me free' lines, as to the time line of partings & reunions.

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