Col Muhamad Khalid Khan

Gold Star - 54,052 Points (Ist May 1958 / Abbottabad Pakistan)

Seeker Of Love - Poem by Col Muhamad Khalid Khan

Seeker of love relentlessly aspires
Beloved's one glance which inspires
Him to embrace beauty naked wires
This is what he through out desires

With a chance he feels in paradise
Beauty becomes for him love prize
This is how love increases in size
This becomes the wisdom of wise

My beloved you attract in a way
When you enter in me like a ray
Night becomes lighted like a day
When your heart allows me to play

Entire universe goes in to trance
When ever I get such like chance
Your beauty is my love a romance
My love with you is first ever glance

Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Copyright 2015 Golden Glow

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Limerick

Comments about Seeker Of Love by Col Muhamad Khalid Khan

  • (8/27/2015 11:41:00 PM)

    The rhyme scheme is not bat though some of the rhymes are a little weak, and I mean by this that they can be better, but the whole idea is captured here.

    I like the emotion shown throughout the poem and some choices of words work well to tell what you want to convey.

    A good poem but one that can go through some improvement.

    Take care and keep on writing!

    Luis Estable
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 27, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, August 28, 2015

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