Col Muhamad Khalid Khan

Gold Star - 45,920 Points (Ist May 1958 / Abbottabad Pakistan)

Blooming Beauty - Poem by Col Muhamad Khalid Khan

Love is what we sacrifice
By being good and being nice
It is not barter or bargain
It is grace in shimmering rain
It is what makes us go high
It is a point to touch of sky
Oh my beloved I admit
I am in love let me submit
Please embrace me with love
Like an innocent beautiful dove
I can't praise your charm
By worshiping you with norm
But still i may maintain
You are beauty blooming in rain
Where ever I am you are with me
This is what your love could be

Copyright 2014 Golden Glow

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Blooming Beauty by Col Muhamad Khalid Khan

  • Elena Sandu (3/5/2017 3:31:00 PM)


    Beautiful imagery and truthful poem, thank you for share. (Report) Reply

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  • Siddartha Montik (1/16/2017 6:38:00 AM)

    Beautiful ! !
    Very nicely said Sir. Truths as each stamza revealing. thank you. for sharing.! ! (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (12/25/2014 11:47:00 AM)


    Indeed, love is sacrifice. It's giving wholeheartedly without expecting anything in return. IT IS NOT BARTER OR BARGAIN. A well articulated poem written with insight to capture the essence of love. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX. (Report) Reply

  • Yasmin Khan (12/20/2014 12:41:00 PM)


    The poem defines love beautifully. It's grace and not a barter or bargain. (Report) Reply

  • Yasmin Khan (12/20/2014 12:40:00 PM)


    The poem defines love beautifully. It's grace and not a barter or bargain. (Report) Reply

  • Alesia Leach (11/17/2014 5:06:00 PM)


    A lovely poem, wonderfully penned with great flow and rhyme. (Report) Reply

  • (11/10/2014 2:48:00 AM)


    It is grace in shimmering rain...........................beautiful love poem sir....enjoyed reading (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/9/2014 8:17:00 AM)


    Another name of love is sacrifice..today Saty Mew Jayte a TV serial hosted by Amir Khan one social Activist Purnima told Power does not bring love but love gives us power..very nice poem :) (Report) Reply

    Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/9/2014 10:37:00 PM)

    Thanks
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

  • (11/9/2014 7:14:00 AM)


    Lovely poem. Love is beauty blooming in rain! Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for visiting my page and for your kind comment. (Report) Reply

    Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/9/2014 10:38:00 PM)

    Thanks
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (11/8/2014 9:11:00 PM)


    A compelling and creative composition my friend! (Report) Reply

    Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/9/2014 1:42:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot Howard for the kindness.
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 7, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, November 7, 2014


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