Senior Friends Poem by helo there

Senior Friends

Rating: 4.8


now we're leaving
to several places
building our future
with the saddest faces

just remember when you're gone
the beautiful memories you left behind
so we can sit a few more times
and still have stories to remind

i know i can't stand in your way
and let emotions rule my mind
i thought i could make you stay
i didn't realize it make me blind

for the last thing i could tell
i'll miss you and your little things
don't fall for a boy's spell
cause that would kill my guitar strings

Thursday, February 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 February 2015

A well articulated piece penned with nice scheme. Very good, keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Carla Brens 26 February 2015

any help to edit it?

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