Saturday, November 17, 2018

Senryu: Desire Incomplete Comments

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A poor man sipping
Evening tea; Thought of Biscuit…
Sun dips into Sea!
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Pallab Chaudhury
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M Asim Nehal 20 November 2018

Great imagery and a fantastic Senryu.......Since your poem is about relationships Senryu is appropriate.

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Pallab Chaudhury 22 November 2018

Thank you for re-minding me, my dear... With best wishes PC

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