Saturday, April 28, 2018

Senryu: Neighbouring Moon Comments

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If you stay on MOON
You'd be eager to see me
During EARTH-rising.
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Pallab Chaudhury
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Akhtar Jawad 04 May 2018

I see moon symbolizing the beloved, I see the earth symbolizing the lover, I listen to the call of love to stay at a moon. A beautiful poem.

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Pallab Chaudhury 05 May 2018

Nicely illustrated. Thank you so much. With best wishes and regards.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 April 2018

Moon is eager to meet this Earth and we are eager to meet moon. This brilliant haiku gives nice view of moon in perception...10

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Pallab Chaudhury 03 May 2018

Thanking you a lot, for your kind visit to the e-page. With regds.

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