Sentiments...... Poem by Preethi Praveen

Sentiments......

Rating: 4.3


Dark was the night, With slow wind.
Serene darkness, the penance of the day.
Her tears as raindrops, they cold…
Kisses the soft petals, and why not me?

No moon, no stars..only dark clouds.
I cannot see the lea, Covering earth..
but heard the idyll, Inciting emotions,
Rapturous lines, Sweet melody.

Thought of youth, and jokes of truth,
Deep breath and eye that wet,
A sudden, silent, what a torpid world,
any hope for me here any more?

I looked up to sky, moon came out of clouds
Closed my eyes, felt the cold wind,
smell of earth in my breath and blood
I realize that imminent is a windfall in my life...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 21 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Preethi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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