Tuesday, November 25, 2008

September Is Misconception Comments

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There you stand, somewhere between the shadows of my mistakes.
Untouched by darkness, your head is turned away.
I am consumed by the bruises you left me.
Your careless words deceive my delicate mind-instead I listen to your glances.
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Fabio Lewinski
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Habib Abodunrin Zakari 16 January 2009

Hello fabio I've your september... It is wonderful. fabio please do try let your poems have figures of speech that would make them look more wonderful and enjoyable. I Look forward to seeing your new poem in this outlook.

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Fabio Lewinski

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