Wednesday, October 17, 2018

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Ineffable -
Still I write these lines
trite.
A scaffold of words
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Chas Weeden
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Jazib Kamalvi 02 February 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Chas Weeden. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 October 2018

you don't create fire you endure it. Is that the difference? This is your nature, share and compare us ours. A very fine poem full of thoughts and original way of depicting...... thank u dear poet. tony

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Chinedu Dike 17 October 2018

Well thought out and nicely brought for with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Chas.

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