Serenity Poem by ritty patnaik

Serenity

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serenity....
outstanding quality,
in women and nature.

when you stop seeing with eyes
and start seeing in the mind
communicate with thoughts,
and hear through inner ears..

serenity begins,
when touch, with feelings begin.
as if you are under water,
yet riding the waves..

serenity, is a love that doesn't splash.
but quietly stays in the heart
when the surface is rippled
the eyes are calm,
he who gives serenity,
is also the guardian of it.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 18 October 2009

a nice one, ritty....but, ....if i am not wrong, all the five senses perceive in mind only....yes? ? ?

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