Sunday, May 30, 2010

Serenity Comments

Rating: 2.5

Why is my life falling out of line?
i cant imagine...why.
this is all new to my mind....
i dont know what to do...
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trina johnson
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Robin Machorro 11 June 2010

veryy good! i can really relate to what you have to say in this poem and i love how it has no rhythm not all poems have to be that way great job :)

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Echo Zaria 30 May 2010

Interesting, but not the best I have a hard time trying to read it out loud; no rhythm

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trina johnson

trina johnson

danville kentucky
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