Seventy Four Comments

Amazing concept, loved the conversational aspect of this poem and really enjoyed its wittiness. *My humble opinion* personally I feel this would poem would be stronger if the ending came back to the dog - perhaps a slight bit of repetition from the first few lines, or just simply another questions posed to the dog? ? - I know you've not asked for feedback, but I feel this slight alteration would strengthen this poem tenfold - apologies for any offence I've caused Jared. It wasn't intended.

Very practical............depicted in an innovative way..............thank you