Wednesday, December 18, 2013

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Outside is cold and dark
Underneath the willow he stands
I shout his name, he will not turn
When I run to the sorrowful tree
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Desolate Beauty
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Abdallah Gamal 18 December 2013

Truly your poem is a masterpiece! Your use of words was very precise. The words ((Whisper, shouting, ...etc)) drew a picture in fact a dark picture but has a lot of meanings, so imaginative and creative.. Keep up the good work!

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