Wednesday, February 5, 2014

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When the sun hides
The time has stopped
For the reverse of life
To arise from their slumber
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Ayako Mikawa
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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 June 2014

great imagery and great words agreed with Geetha, i love the last stanza too thanks for sharing

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Geetha Jayakumar 05 February 2014

Beautiful poem.. Very true said, How the life would be without sunshine. Beautiful lines... The bridge has parted Freedom is no more As the innocence begs For the sun to shine once more.......Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

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