adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

adheez van der beanthz
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I loved poetry since I was a kid and I started writing poetry when I was in junior high school
But a lot of my poetry archive that has been lost because basically I wrote just for fun, just for personal consumption
most of my poems with the theme of love, but then I started to learn and expand on the themes are more universal
I am not a good writer so I would be very grateful if I am given some input, advice or criticism
One more thing, I write in my language, the Indonesian language, then I translated it into English in this forum
So it is very possible fault wording or meaning of the poems that I posted here because I was less proficient in English
I hope my ... more »

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  • Kelly Linkous Kelly Linkous (8/15/2013 1:56:00 PM)

    I like your poetry it is very good.

  • Messaoud Allalouche (8/11/2013 1:11:00 PM)

    I like your peoms and special y this one you have a great talent of writing good luck friend

  • Dr. Ramesh Mukhopadhyaya (7/27/2013 1:07:00 PM)

    Last Kisses is a good poem aburning with the emotions of a young man for his mate

  • Ibrahim Ibn Salma Ibrahim Ibn Salma (12/17/2012 11:54:00 AM)

    I like your soul mate poem it has a good image of a romantic setting.

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Best Poem of adheez van der beanthz

A Gun, A Man And Rights For New Brand

a man with rights
a gun at his side
no reason to fight
act as a cowboy in the past

a gun, a man, and a wisdom
fire anyone, random
a car, a child, even a wall
rush to greet the deathly call

are we in war?
why blood flooding on my floor?
while the silent Parliament
still hold on in his old brand

a nation with its laws
all the world see your show
the rights of the gun
a player has some fun

until when this will end?
how many life have to be sent?
might you finally understand
and make a better amendment

a man who ...

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