Shadow, in this silent hour-my soul in the field of dying flowers.
Seeking someones hand-vultures in the sky, this is the dying land,
this is where I stand.
By candlelight.....you raised the night.
By the open sea, sung sorrow's dream,
as the angel wept by the running
stream.
great piece of state description, a place where you stand...short but meaningful, poetically explanatory.. a 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The rhyme scheme brought this poems depressing nature to life. It was also short simple and universal, in my opinon a great poem.