Shadow (In The Silent Hour) Poem by THEO RAY

Shadow (In The Silent Hour)



Shadow, in this silent hour-my soul in the field of dying flowers.
Seeking someones hand-vultures in the sky, this is the dying land,
this is where I stand.

By candlelight.....you raised the night.
By the open sea, sung sorrow's dream,
as the angel wept by the running
stream.

Thursday, October 23, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: angel,flowers,running,seeking,sorrow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Justin Unanue 07 November 2009

The rhyme scheme brought this poems depressing nature to life. It was also short simple and universal, in my opinon a great poem.

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C T Heart 23 October 2008

great piece of state description, a place where you stand...short but meaningful, poetically explanatory.. a 10.

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