Shadow Of Dissent Poem by Fred Rik Kesner

Shadow Of Dissent

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A stray raggamuffin breeze skitters through the yard,
catching on the rags left drying on the line—
each one a small refusal, a frayed rebuttal
to the tidy doctrines the elders once stitched.

A pair of gams angles past the gate,
carefree, unmeasured, unblessed by any ledger.
Someone laughs into a muffle,
a sound half‑muffed, half‑winged,
as if the world were loosening its collar.

A muffin sits cooling on the sill,
its fin of steam rising like a shrug—
neither symbol nor lesson,
just warmth drifting into the late afternoon
like cotton candy dissolving on a tongue
that refuses to confess anything but the moment.

And the yard—
unruled, unindexed—
keeps offering these small, stubborn gestures,
each one a pivot away from the old script,
each one a way of being here
without bowing to the frame.





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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tamara Beryl Latham 16 June 2026

An impressive write with extremely vivid imagery. You've painted a Renoir with words. Loved it! Thanks for sharing. : -)

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Fred Rik Kesner 19 June 2026

Thank you for the generous words. I appreciate the way you saw colour and shape in this poem. Your response met it with real care which is much valued and appreciated.

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