Saturday, October 1, 2011

Shadows (Forgotten Day) Comments

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the scrape of the razor
against his shadow dreams;
voices on the tip
of the tongue of his thoughts....
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Eric Cockrell
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Patti Masterman 01 October 2011

I can kind of see a river of ideas and similar themes running through your latest poetry; this I believe is what the best of writers do, they explore themes, turn them over and around and examine every edge from every angle, auditioning a turn of phrase till every last bit of meaning has come clear.

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