Shared Room With You Poem by Chulsoo Kim

Shared Room With You

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Inside you, there is space
which comes from your conciousness
since you can tell it is for you or not;
grown and compressed space
for arguments or daily feelings
such as happiness coming out from smoothness,
sorrow originated from losing,
and artificaily drilled mind control
will control you
until you can annihilate it.
You can deliver
your feeling to outside
by using that space
to communicate, show,
and cotrol the space which corresponds to it and exists outside,
so you can stand up alone in your world.
You can get feedback,
translate it to your internal words,
and store them in the space
nontheless they are good or not.
Several hundreds and thousands stored words tell you
your status in specific case
and heighten your brightness
which will lead to pain.
You pull out pain
with that portion of space
and try to eleminate blackened dots and lines of pains
which existed together with preciousness
inside your that portion of space,
and leaves room to share with others.
It can be a light to you and your sapce.
You take steps that way and
light and valuables can come out to your and my room.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zaynab Elzain 11 July 2010

gd poem man, i like this lines the most: your status in specific case and heighten your brightness which will lead to pain...gd work

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