Sharing Poem by dipak adhya

Sharing

Rating: 5.0


Sharing

I can see your despair
But its poignancy
Is yet to realise
I want to listen them now

You share your sorrow
I'll not cry listening to it
But, if a warm sigh of mine
Touches you
It will make you feel my sharing
And that certainly will give you
A friend's touch

I'll share mine
I'll pour all sorrow of past
My friend, please listen to me
And compare

Both sadness are salty
They nibble us unobtrusively
Let me say
And I'll listen yours

This sharing may ruin the grief
Or not
But certainly give us a new breathe to live

Tuesday, January 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sharing has an extraordinary capacity to soothe the poignancy of sadness of life...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 29 January 2019

Dipak, such a touching poem...10++++

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