Shattered Poem by Jongoni Sripriya

Shattered

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The young me was much fond of dreams,
Creating and working for making them true.
The young me had many goals and plans,
Living in the hope of accomplishing them.
The young me had sight of many opportunities,
Waiting to grow up soon and grab them upon.

The young me was strong and bold,
Neglecting criticism against her plans.
The young me was dedicated and enthusiastic,
In the belief that efforts never go vain.
The young me was boundless in thoughts,
And extended the radii of life.

The young me was happy and fine,
Time passed by, thrown stones and restrictions.
The young me slowly started to change,
Into a shattered me and changed many.
The shattered me with a thick shell,
Never let her out of it with a shrink-ed radii

The shattered me was so lost,
That she can't see light out side the dark cave.
The shattered me was so down,
That she gave up her goals and plans.
The shattered me was so damaged,
That she forgone her capabilities.

The shattered me was so tired,
That she works but for the sake of nothing
The shattered me was dejected,
Laughing at the young me and said things changed.
The shattered me was in state of despondency,
Who has forgotten to laugh heart fully long ago.

Shattered
Sunday, April 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: change,changing moods,depression,failure,lost
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is about all those who slowly lost their hope and confidence in their dreams and capabilities due to numerous reasons. Time and life always make us to play a unknown game.we are unaware of what comes next.At a times we are often lost and lose all our patience and hopes....and even sometimes give up all our dreams. But as their is a saying "When you want something all the universe conspires in helping you achieve it"....Though little delayed That will happen for sure all it requires is little patience and belief in once self and our efforts.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 March 2020

The young me was much fond of dreams, Creating and working for making them true. The young me had many goals and plans, Living in the hope of accomplishing them. dreams, their fulfillment. be a dreamer. we have so very few dreamers in this world. thank you for this wonderful poem. tony. write more please and give us to read.. tony

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