Flooded Mind Poem by Jongoni Sripriya

Flooded Mind

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The most incredible part, the mind.
Always flooded with thoughts that doesn't mind.
Hell yes, It's overflowing with mixed thoughts,
mixed emotions, mixed feelings, indecisiveness,
and what not.

The most creative part, the mind.
Always flooded with thoughts that you will never mind.
Hell yes, It's overthinking with a pinch of pessimism.
With no idea about the possibilities of optimism,
and even worse.

The most dynamic part, the mind.
Always busy with thoughts which will never matter.
Hell yes, It's over analyzing with full of negativeness.
With no ray of hope about the beautiful tomorrow,
and bliss.

The most incredible part, the mind.
Always stuck up in above ways when depressed.
Hell yes, It's over anxiousness that makes it more miserable.
Throwing you into the deep trench,
With tons load above you.

The most creative part, the mind.
Often forgets that nothing is permanent.
Even the biggest problems, toughest challenges,
Miserable circumstances, are eager to pass.
and you realize when they pass past.

The most dynamic part, the mind.
Always runs, processes thoughts in one or other way,
life need not to be necessarily always in the way,
you wanted your life to be.
It's all you who should be strong,
and choose how you want to feel life like.

Flooded Mind
Friday, March 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,thinking ,thoughts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We all will have ups and downs in our life. Everyone must have suffered at one or other point of time in their life. Nothing will go as you have planned and you wished. Every things will turn out into something you have never expected..bad times as well as good times. It's completely on us how you want to take life as....If we stay strong and optimistic we will overcome our problems with peaceful mind and situations never actually matter.....If you cry over things and fall into depression too...anyway one day your life will change and get out of problems and then realize how much time you have wasted crying over temporary troubles.So now it's our choice, brain will never stop thinking...it's job is to think and process thoughts....but It's actually you who has to choose what you want....to stay calm and composed or cry over everything that's not happening in your way
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 September 2019

Beautiful conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful work of art.

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Jongoni Sripriya 27 September 2019

Thank you! ! Chinedu Dike

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 May 2019

The brain continues to develop daily newer synapses keep on springing like ideas come to a MILITARY COMMANDER OR A POLITICIAN keep on thinking listen to every one like your beloved staff they have more details for you to grasp then salute your own MIND GRIND AND A HAPPY SOLUTION FIND if you succeed you must be humble and if you fail accept the tumble and RISE like Maya...CONTD

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Jongoni Sripriya 11 May 2019

Nice thoughts " If you succeed you must be humble and if you fail accept the tumble and rise"

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 April 2019

The most creative part, the mind. Often forgets that nothing is permanent. Even the biggest problems, toughest challenges, Miserable circumstances, are eager to pass. this poem is pure wisdom. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Jongoni Sripriya 08 April 2019

Thank you Tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 March 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Sripriya. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Jongoni Sripriya 29 March 2019

Thank you, That means a lot

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 March 2019

t's overflowing with mixed thoughts, mixed emotions, mixed feelings, indecisiveness, and what not. yes human mind is a great mystery...... in the poet's notes you give us an impression you have attained the wisdom beyond your age. wish u well. write more and more. thank u. tony

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Jongoni Sripriya 29 March 2019

Thank you very much

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