She Poem by Fname Lname

She

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She knew nothing but the black
She rose, to the shining yellow
She pushed, but with hands
She fought, but to gain
She heaved, but with resolve
She tore the black, but with rage
She awed the orange, but with a blink
She leaped at the orange, but forgot to let go
She got pushed, back to the deepest black
She again knew nothing but the black

She rose, not with stable legs
She pushed, not with strong hands
She fought, not to gain
She heaved, not with resolve
She blew the black, all with a smile
She burst the bubble, all with a smile
She saw orange, and she twirled
She saw chaos, but she twirled
She twirled, to the chaotic tune
She knew only dark order, so she twirled ……with a smile.

Thursday, November 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: emotion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I just wrote something and wanted to see if its ok.
Not even sure if it counts as poem just some words that went through my mind when I was listening to music
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 04 June 2019

Write comment. Such a beautiful start, Fname Lname. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Rini Shibu 17 November 2017

She blew the black with a smile She burst the bubble She saw orange.. Thought invoking poem.. You may like my poem.. Beauty in black

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