Thursday, May 25, 2006

She Cries Comments

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Alone, she sits in the dark
with her heart in her hands
as the tear drops cleanse the wounds.
She cries.
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Jacqueline Dougherty
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Lesa K 06 July 2006

Very sad, but also hopeful. I like how you said 'tears will cleanse the wounds.' Tears can be very cleansing indeed. Keep up the good work!

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Jacqueline Dougherty

Jacqueline Dougherty

Stony Brook, New York
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