Monday, May 20, 2013

She Held My Hand Comments

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It is a lucky man who gets to hold her hand
As she takes you far beyond the Promised Land
She will take you on a trip that you’ve never been before
As she opens up every door.
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Wahab Abdul 20 May 2013

the poem has a good plot written with much flow and diction is praise worthy..enjoyed reading.. there is little undertone of fun..

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