Friday, January 10, 2025

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She opened the door with a whack of her hip
But not in an aggressive way
It was very sexy to witness
There was passion in her steps
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D.N. Rebb
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M. Asim Nehal 11 January 2025

I haven't read a poem that was so creative and full of details in a while. Your words made me feel warm and cozy, like a candle that slowly melts. Great job on the poem!

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D.N. Rebb 13 January 2025

Thanks for the kind response, M. Asim. And for the very poetic metaphor. (but wait, is it a metaphor?)

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