She Need Life Poem by Nayef Rashid

She Need Life



she like to live her life
but she dont like to build her life
she need every things to her
she didnt like to build
she need funy life
she didnt need to build
she didnt see me
she just see her self
she just need to be her self
she didnt need to build
she like her way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 31 December 2009

ummm... the poem is good but please, don't be offended, i think the title needs to be 'She Needs Life'... but you write good!

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