She Offers More Than Too Much Poem by Carlos Rodriguez

She Offers More Than Too Much

Rating: 4.5


Dark eyes of velvet stone
Wild angel dancing all alone
Lips like blood red wine
She's looking more than fine
She dances,
Through time and space
With an everlasting smile upon her face
And she's singing her song
Nothing can go wrong
Capturing hearts
Playing her part
The game she plays
Lethal and cruel
And breaking all the rules
How can you resist
That sweet and tender touch
When everything she offers
Is more than too much.

Copyright by Carlos Rodriguez,2006

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theresa Rayman 07 April 2006

Carlos, This is wonderful. I love the flow and the unforced rhyme pattern. You have painted a lovely, vivid picture here with your words. Excellent work! Blessings! - TGR(Theresa)

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