She Teaches The Life From Whence She Comes Poem by CHRISTOPHER EBENEZER

She Teaches The Life From Whence She Comes

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She's free to all but engaged to few
She walks the street every which way
She speaks to men who are willing to hear
and I have heard her words are as good as gold
She's so endowed by riches untold
But she's got few friends;
not all men can go her way
They say the ways and life she teaches
are unlike those of men who live around

She comes from a far far country untold,
whose streets are lined with gold and myrrh.
It's said of the king from whence she came
That once he went to buy some slaves
And she was sent to teach them his ways.
But the facts are these,
That men from hither she has come
Are all and all slaves
She's known so well to speak thereof,
'Let a man alone where no one can watch
And what he does is who he is'
and
'Give a man the liberty to choose for himself
And what he chooses is what he craves'
'Looking for whom to trust with gold?
Give him a bar and as much as he makes of it
Is as much trust he deserves'
and
'If a man say's against,
Give him the opportunity to do against without noting to loose,
If he does against then he is truly against'.
These and many more she always would say.
If you care to know her name, it's wisdom
And her King is Jesus.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dale Mullock 13 June 2010

Hello once again Chris! This is a very good story poem again from the folds and bindings of the bible but it well written and tell the tale in a righteous way and delivers the morals extreemly well and embeds itself in the readers mind. Well done! Just a couple of things my friend, line 4 in stanza two should buy not bye, and line 20 in stanza 2 should end in 'with nothing to lose' just a couple of typos mate nothing serious, so a veyr good effort indeed! keep up the good writing! Dale :)

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