'A Man With No Love' Poem by CHRISTOPHER EBENEZER

'A Man With No Love'

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I will wait! I will wait! !
for the best of the best
I will wait! I will wait! !
for as long as i may
I will wait! I will wait! !
till the lot falls on me
I will wait! I will wait! !
till you are prepared
I will wait! I will wait! !
for wounds to heal out
I will wait! I will wait! !
till seeds multiply
I will wait! I will wait! !
till children grow wise
I will wait! I will wait! !
till elephants give birth
I will wait! I will wait! !
a man with no love
can none of these say.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucia Domingos Fula 02 June 2010

I will wait! I will wait! ! for the best of the best I will wait! I will wait! ! for as long as i may. (that's my favourite verse) I love this poem especially the way you use the repetition.and the way you put the words together.the poem is beautiful very beautiful.keep it up and keep more coming.i love this poem so much! ! ! ! wow i 'm just speechless! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! very speechless actually! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 14 June 2010

The message was well recieved, part of love is patience and you have to pay attention

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Kolawole Ajao 04 June 2010

You are darn right! Like butressing Rudyard Kipling's voice: 'If you can wait and not be tired waiting.... Write more!

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Iron Panda 23™ 04 June 2010

nice write! ! ! ! !

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Lady Grace 03 June 2010

wait.....this is a good song too..

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Becca Moore 03 June 2010

tis is really good i loves it! !

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