Thursday, July 3, 2014

She Yearns Comments

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I wear my heart on my sleeve,
And oh can't you see,
I'm begging you please,
Stop hurting me.
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Ashlee Woods
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Jack Growden 04 July 2014

This has the potential to be a really really good poem. Nice start but sometimes the wording is a bit forced. Still an enjoyable read :)

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Colleen Courtney 03 July 2014

Such an honest and from the heart write. Great rhyming rhythm also. The sing-song flow makes it an enjoyable read!

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