Shift Your Load

Rating: 5.0

Too much age
On too many faces.
Shift Your Load.

Too much being lost
That someone else cost.
Shift Your Load.

Too much stress
You are giving your best.
Shift Your Load.

Too little laughter
What life are you after.
Shift Your Load.

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Naveen Choudhary 25 August 2005

Nice try, you seems to be a pretty young at writing But don't worry, with time you will have that quality and flow words keep writing. i wanna see u improving. I will surely check ur next one bye Naveen

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Matthew Pearson 25 August 2005

Like the words of a PMA R & B song. I am really undecided as to whether that is a good thing or a bad thing. I can only offer that what you have here is too short a thing. More of a thing next time, please.

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