Shiver * Poem by Satya Prakash

Shiver *

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The mountains do not shiver
Nor the trees, nor the valleys
Only the flame of a lamp
From a distant cottage
On a slope
Shivers
Reflected on the lake below.

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* Translated from Ajneya's SAGAR MUDRA.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2010

The mountains do not shiver Nor the trees, nor the valleys Only the flame of a lamp From a distant cottage On a slope Shivers Reflected on the lake below...............................ho vividly you have depicted the true picture... it is simple way of putting the facts... mind blowing and very nice i liked it....10 read mine......i miss, , , come home... anywhere... bidding farewell

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